How to write clearly and influence people
> The reason why people need a barrage of meetings and conference calls comes down to poor communication and suboptimal writing. (20 words)
You can replace "The reason why ... comes down to" with "because of":
"People need a barrage of meetings and conference calls because of poor communication and suboptimal writing." (16 words)
Or better: "Poor communication causes excessive meetings and conference calls." (8 words)
Powerful tips there. 👍
> The reason why people need a barrage of meetings and conference calls comes down to poor communication and suboptimal writing. (20 words)
You can replace "The reason why ... comes down to" with "because of":
"People need a barrage of meetings and conference calls because of poor communication and suboptimal writing." (16 words)
Or better: "Poor communication causes excessive meetings and conference calls." (8 words)
Powerful tips there. 👍